http://freepdfhosting.com/575333efaa.pdf

Please note that the art is not final. These are just random sketches of interior art. I used for general sizing.

This module will feature a color cover from Keven Mayle and interior work by Nathan Nada of previous PG&S module fame (or infamy, depending on whether you liked them or not).

Looks good. Like the main picture. Looks like it's gonna be a promising image. Don't quite get the little miages below, and I think vivid greein is a little harsh if the module is going to have a BW rendered image. The image needs to be the focal point, and not the background.

With a module the cantral image draws the eye first; you look at the image and then the eye takes in the surrounding page, searching text and title etc. There is a dange with non-dominant images that you first look at the page as a whole and then search out the image and text within it. You might want to stick to pastel or muted pastel backgrounds, or go for bold black and white rendering.

Just my 2c.

I like the idea of pulling three interior art pieces out onto the cover. You might also consider a sneek peak of a map portion if done well (say center box) akin to the sneek peaks RJK does to promote his works (eg The Stalk)

Four colour is good.
Don't know about the choice of tilte font.

Looking good, Bill!

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