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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 12:10 pm

The rough draft for S1 Circle of Fire has gone out to the editorial board.

If you would like to join the board in editing, proofing, or dismantling this or other future Pacesetter products, shoot me a pm with your email address. I will add you to the board!

The schedule for the remainder of the year will be S1 Circle of Fire and I1 Death at Signal Island (Quickplay adventure).
SP1 Subtropolis: Into the Depths will only go to editors who are also CLP Members that are eligible to recieve the module at the end of the year.

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:27 am

Cover Mock Up.

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:54 am

Yeah, that's a winner.

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:07 pm

I'm happy to proof read until I see a mistake....

The first letter, top hand corner of cover should be an "S" and not a "C".

Job done! :wink:

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:12 pm

jonjhargreaves wrote:I'm happy to proof read until I see a mistake....

The first letter, top hand corner of cover should be an "S" and not a "C".

Job done!

I will add you to the committee!

I use S for all new modules until I formally set them in a series. Circle of Fire is part of the "C" series - City of Spire module series which will have three parts C1, C2 The Goblin Crown and C3 The City of Spire.

I figured someone would pick up on that!

Bill

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:35 pm

On the cover, one too many "is" in the following sentence.

"The Circle of Fire is an adventure is designed for 3-5 characters...."

Should read:

"The Circle of Fire is an adventure designed for 3-5 characters...."

or

"The Circle of fire adventure is designed for 3-5 characters..."

The next sentence's use of commas is a bit off. It would read better as:

"This module includes a 32-page adventure book, pre-generated characters, pre-generaged maps, and a full-color removable cardstock cover."

(This text change is only my opinion as anyone who is not already in the wise of what you are referring to could be confused by the original wording, where the comma changes are grammatical.)

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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:30 pm

Midian_Beasttoothe wrote:On the cover, one too many "is" in the .)

The cover is only a mock up. Not the final. I just put the wording together to fill the white space for now. It will change, but thanks for looking!

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Last edited by bbarsh on Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:02 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 8:39 am

Outstanding art work!

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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:36 pm

That cover is teh awesome! Gonna have to get a copy of this one.

Is it me or does that lich on the bottom right look like he's holding a derringer? :lol:

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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:42 pm

Agent Cooper wrote:That cover is teh awesome! Gonna have to get a copy of this one.

Is it me or does that lich on the bottom right look like he's holding a derringer?

No, he's giving someone the finger...I mean, pointing a finger. :wink:

Yes, it looks a little like that.

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